Communication may eventually be your
outcome, but it is not the key. It does not open the door. There is a reason
Rene Descartes said: “I think, therefore, I am.” The key to good writing is
thinking.
Good writing often effectively delivers
your message and can elicit a range of reactions and emotions, which lead to
communication, but good writing does not happen without your brain kicking into
action.
You might coast in low gear for a while if
you haven’t made up your mind yet about your focus or your topic. You might
move into mid-gear if you have a sense for where you’re going and have thought about
the idea in the past, you just haven’t written anything yet. You can take off
into high gear if you have been musing for a while first and have a concept in
mind, and you are just itching to get the beast off your chest and launch it
onto the page or screen.
You think, therefore, you write. When you
write, and especially if you’re a beginner, if you’ve not done all your
thinking, your writing will wear it.
For example, let’s say you want to write
about the best ways to avoid the longest line-ups in the grocery store. Before
you sit and write, you are going to want to make 10 or 12 trips to the grocery
store. You will want to make a quick express trip with only four or five items,
take note if someone is ahead of you with 25 items, ask the bored, apathetic
cashier if she has any idea how long it takes her on average to check someone
through and when she gives you that ‘are-you-for-real’ glare, you know you’ve
got a snippet of ‘material’ about which to write.
Then you’ll need to go back to your grocery
store and do a load where people take one look at your cart, grimace and move
to any other line but yours, even longer ones. Your cart is so full, you can’t
keep the last few boxes of macaroni and cheese from sliding off and careening
to the ground.
You muse about the possibilities on the bus
on your way home from work. When you’re walking to the coffee shop to get a
refill halfway through the morning, you’ll daydream wondering if there’s a
karma connection with people and grocery line-ups or if when people line up,
the cashiers sub-consciously decide how long they will take for each person by
how they look and how they carry themselves. When you sit on the throne, you’ll
wonder if you dressed differently or bought higher-end items, would that get you
better service and speed up your progress in line. When you think you’re not
even thinking anymore, you will be thinking – which means, you’re writing.
In between all your trips, you are putting
the pieces together in your mind. You may use a notebook or a journal or a
digi-recorder to spew your thoughts and clear out the debris. This tactic is
highly recommended as it allows you to clear clutter out of your head so it
doesn’t show up as a splat somewhere on your writing. Clearing the clutter will
help condense the amount of thinking time you need before you become ready to
put down the real words that will actually make sense and exhibit coherence – a
much sought-after goal.
I’ve given up on the grocery store
research. No matter what I do, I end up in the longest one, even when it looks
shorter. But I still continue to indulge in thinking before writing. You can
write without having done any thinking, but you will end up with splatters all
over a page. For some writers, that’s their process. They make it work, though,
because they clean it up. Good writers will shape those splatters until they
weave together, fit snuggly or sing in unison, depending on their desired
product. So, some people think on the page, some off the page; either way, the
incubation must happen or the writing suffers.
Good writing does not have meandering
tangents, unless they are meant to entertain or make a point, or sentences that
refuse to flow coherently or that waste the reader’s time, or remnants of your
leftover thinking that should have stayed in your head. Good writing has
purpose, heart, forethought and care. All of these qualities lead to great
communication.
Previously published on Helium.com (now
defunct)
http://www.humanities360.com/index.php/communicating-through-good-writing-how-to-write-well-45250/
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